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Wednesday, March 4, 2026

SOL26: March5: You Deserve Flowers

 This month, I am writing with the Two Writing Teachers Slice of Life community. Today's slice is a reverse poem about dreaded appointments. I tried several forms before I settled on this one!  

"Onto the next appointment," I sighed wondering if my luck would hold, while holding my tulips tightly in the bag where I keep my notebook, hopes and dreams.

"You deserve flowers," I thought as I skipped out of the building grabbing some yellow tulips near the door.

"I looked over all the lab reports and data from the last year. I have to say you are stable,!" she smiled before she added a few ifs, ands and buts about returning....

"My blood pressure is going to be through the roof," I thought as I waited for what seemed to be an eternity but really was just the status quo for doctors' offices. 

"Show me the way," I told Google Maps and headed to the appointment, thinking about every possible excuse I could and dreading the imminent scolding.

"I'm thinking spring," I thought as I donned a light weight top, even though it was snowing last night, hoping the cheerful colors would brighten my mood!

"I'll take that appointment," I said very reluctantly to the person inquiring when I was going to come back to see this doctor, as I was overdue.

"I hope time will help," I steamed as I exited the glass monolith, not agreeing with her, in my opinion, aggressive, plan. 

"I don't see any way around it," the doctor said shaking her head. "You are going to have to have to at some point, but take a few weeks to think it over!" 

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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Yes, flowers and every good thing. May the Lord bless you to overflowing with the desires of your heart. Too many of these 'appointments' for colleagues and friends in the last few weeks.

Beth Sanderson said...

Visiting the doctor DOES bring a range of emotions -- dread, delay, interminable waiting, breath holding, relief usually -- you capture all the feelings in such an engaging manner. Thank you for sharing. I feel you!

Margaret Simon said...

I like how you structured this piece around quotes during your day. Always start with a bundle of flowers. That can make any dreaded news feel happier.

Glenda Funk said...

Anita,
It sounds as though you had some bad news. Your assessment of some doctors is spot on. I have found—after lots of effort—a group of doctors I’m very comfortable with, and I wish that for all of us, especially as we age, Itschard talking to those who haven’t had the aging problem. Now treat yourself to more tulips.